Money Making Schemes

my english essay?

“The media controls our lives”. This statement goes around the world having people wonder if it’s true or false. There are millions of different influences haunting a lot of people to do certain things, act certain ways and to buy certain clothes.
Although some don’t give in to the television advertisements, most give in to fashion. I mean, who is going to walk down the street in something that nobody likes?
Then again, who is going to want to walk down the street looking bigger than the average weight because they’re afraid of being called fat?
Most girls and some guys want to fit in, which is where modelling comes in.
Companies hire so many beautiful young girls to walk down a runway and show of the latest trends, but what they don’t realise is how much of an impact it is putting on the teenagers who want to be pretty and popular
The media portrays celebrities and models all in the same way. They make them seem flawless and beautiful, skinny and tanned. Every picture is air brushed yet, normal people want to be exactly like what they see in the magazines. Girls everywhere strive to be what is impossible-they go to extremes to try to look like that girl on the cover of the magazine which then leads to eating disorders, extreme diets and can cause diseases such as bulimia and anorexia.
Girls who are heavier, taller, have acne or a big nose should still be happy with the way they are-however modelling puts them in a position where they feel they are not good enough, and need to change for everyone, which is wrong.
Now, not only is the media causing things like anorexia and bulimia but it is also causing things like obesity.
The fast food restaurant McDonald’s is not only causing obesity but also wrecking lives. Obesity is a disease which stems from eating fatty foods. This disease can affect anyone. People are dying from being obese everyday, and more and more people are gaining large amounts of weight each year. People who have a love for junk food are constantly being targeted along with children because of the television advertisements and the toys that are given away along with the happy meal at McDonald’s.
They usually target the children with these toys by putting them all over TV and hoping that the kid’s whinge and wine until their parents take them out to buy this little plastic figurine. They work it all out to bring more customers in to eat this food to make more money because in the end, they don’t care how healthy we are. They just care about how much money they are going to make from us.
Everyone knows of this restaurant and if not then you’re considered a freak. Everyone loves this restaurant and once again, if you don’t, you’re considered a freak. People who buy McDonald’s at least once a week gain weight but they still go back to eating it because some say “the taste is irresistible”

This amount of evidence would point out that it’s obvious what the media is actually doing to this world. Society controls the thoughts and emotions of every individual in one way or another. It provides stereotypes and what is considered the normal and if you don’t fit into that category you’re instantly labeled an outcast. Life is tough. Even though it’s your life and you control it, the media is still powerful and can cause death and suicide. Hopefully one day people will realize everyone’s flaws and accept them for who they are. After all, nobody’s perfect.

Is this good?
is having a collage of anorexic girls walking down a runway evidence? and another collage of mcdonalds advertisments and fat kids eating mcdonalds???

Please Correct Run-Ons?

1. Read each of the following sentences below.
2. Rewrite the run-on sentences.
3. Then, write what type of “fixing technique” you used to fix the run on.
4. For sentences that are correct as is, write CORRECT next to them.

* The easiest way to fix a run-on is to separate the two sentences with a period and a capital letter.

Run-On: A gopher runs errands for others, gophers should be energetic.
Corrected: A gopher runs errands for others. Gophers should be energetic.

* You can also fix a run-on by adding a comma and a conjunction.

Run-on: Many professionals are too busy to do errands themselves they need someone who can help them.
Corrected: Many professionals are too busy to do errands themselves, so they need someone who can help them.

* If the two sentences are closely related, add a semicolon.

Run-On: Some gophers are required to have a driver’s license most gophers ride bicycles.
Corrected: Some gophers are required to have a driver’s license; most gophers ride bicycles.

* Add semicolon, a conjunctive adverb, and a comma if needed.

Run-On: Gophers may be paid for the gasoline they use they should negotiate the payment before accepting each job.
Corrected: Gophers may be paid for the gasoline they use; however, they should negotiate the payment before accepting each job.

* Make one of the clauses subordinate by adding a subordinating conjunction.

Run-On: Bike-riding gophers ride fast, they can become dangerous to pedestrians.
Corrected: When bike-riding gophers ride fast, they can become dangerous to pedestrians.

1. Most students use computers on a daily basis now many students are using their computer skills to earn money.

2. Entrepreneurs are people who start their own businesses; using the Internet, some teenagers are doing exactly this.

3. A 16-year-old in Washington created a Web site for reviews of computer hardware. His site is called The View.

4. Another teenager started a business designing Web pages his first customer was an author of novels for preteens.

5. A teen in Ohio created a Web page to sell the beaded jewelry that she makes, many teens have used the Web to find customers for their products.

6. Unlike most adults, many teenagers have been using computers all their lives they have an advantage when it comes to dreaming up computer-related businesses.

7. Twenty years ago, teens might have set up lemonade stands to make money, today they can use computers.

8. Teenagers are also earning money by teaching older people how to use computers.

9. Young children are eager to learn computer skills, many parents do not have the time or knowledge to teach them.

10. For some teens, this situation is a golden opportunity.

my essay. good or not good?

is this good or bad???
“The media controls our lives”. This statement goes around the world having people wonder if it’s true or false. There are millions of different influences haunting
Every one of us to do certain things, act certain ways and to buy certain clothes.
Although some people don’t give in to the television advertisements, we all give in to fashion. I mean, who is going to walk down the street in something that nobody likes?
Then again, who is going to want to walk down the street looking bigger than the average weight because they’re afraid of being called fat?
Most girls and some guys want to fit in, which is where modelling comes in.
Companies hire so many beautiful young girls to walk down a runway and show of the latest trends, but what they don’t realise is how much of an impact it is putting on the teenagers who want to be pretty and popular
The media portrays celebrities and models all in the same way. They make them seem flawless and beautiful, skinny and tanned. Every picture is air brushed yet, normal people want to be exactly like what they see in the magazines. Girls everywhere strive to be what is impossible-they go to extremes to try to look like that girl on the cover of the magazine which leads to eating disorders, extreme diets and can cause diseases such as bulimia and anorexia.
Girls who are heavier, taller, have acne or a big nose should still be happy with the way they are-however modelling puts them in a position where they feel they are not good enough, and need to change for everyone, which is wrong.
Now, not only is the media causing things like anorexia and bulimia but it is also causing obesity.
The fast food restaurant McDonald’s is not only causing obesity but also wrecking lives. Obesity is a disease which stems from eating fatty foods. This disease can affect anyone. People are dying from this disease everyday, and more and more people are gaining large amounts of weight each year. People who have a love for junk food are constantly being targeted along with children because of the television advertisements and the toys that are given away along with the happy meal at McDonald’s.
They usually target the children with these toys by putting them all over TV and hoping that the kids whinge and wine until their parents take them out to buy this little plastic figurine They work it all out to bring more customers in to eat this food to make more money because in the end, they don’t care how healthy we are. They just care about how much money they are going to make from us.
Everyone knows of this restaurant and if not then you’re considered a freak. Everyone loves this restaurant and once again, if you don’t, you’re considered a freak. People who buy McDonald’s at least once a week gain weight but they still go back to eating it because some say “the taste is irresistible”
This amount of evidence would point out that it’s obvious what the media is actually doing to this world. It’s wrecking our lives, putting people in positions where they need serious help to get out of.

I need a conclusion.. any ideas?

is my essay good? any tips?

is this good or bad???
“The media controls our lives”. This statement goes around the world having people wonder if it’s true or false. There are millions of different influences haunting
Every one of us to do certain things, act certain ways and to buy certain clothes.
Although some people don’t give in to the television advertisements, we all give in to fashion. I mean, who is going to walk down the street in something that nobody likes?
Then again, who is going to want to walk down the street looking bigger than the average weight because they’re afraid of being called fat?
Most girls and some guys want to fit in, which is where modelling comes in.
Companies hire so many beautiful young girls to walk down a runway and show of the latest trends, but what they don’t realise is how much of an impact it is putting on the teenagers who want to be pretty and popular
The media portrays celebrities and models all in the same way. They make them seem flawless and beautiful, skinny and tanned. Every picture is air brushed yet, normal people want to be exactly like what they see in the magazines. Girls everywhere strive to be what is impossible-they go to extremes to try to look like that girl on the cover of the magazine which leads to eating disorders, extreme diets and can cause diseases such as bulimia and anorexia.
Girls who are heavier, taller, have acne or a big nose should still be happy with the way they are-however modelling puts them in a position where they feel they are not good enough, and need to change for everyone, which is wrong.
Now, not only is the media causing things like anorexia and bulimia but it is also causing obesity.
The fast food restaurant McDonald’s is not only causing obesity but also wrecking lives. Obesity is a disease which stems from eating fatty foods. This disease can affect anyone. People are dying from this disease everyday, and more and more people are gaining large amounts of weight each year. People who have a love for junk food are constantly being targeted along with children because of the television advertisements and the toys that are given away along with the happy meal at McDonald’s.
They usually target the children with these toys by putting them all over TV and hoping that the kids whinge and wine until their parents take them out to buy this little plastic figurine They work it all out to bring more customers in to eat this food to make more money because in the end, they don’t care how healthy we are. They just care about how much money they are going to make from us.
Everyone knows of this restaurant and if not then you’re considered a freak. Everyone loves this restaurant and once again, if you don’t, you’re considered a freak. People who buy McDonald’s at least once a week gain weight but they still go back to eating it because some say “the taste is irresistible”
This amount of evidence would point out that it’s obvious what the media is actually doing to this world. It’s wrecking our lives, putting people in positions where they need serious help to get out of.

I need a conclusion.. any ideas?

What is a good way to earn money FAST as a teen?

I’m just barely a teenager and I need some money FAST. I plan on sending my mom away to a spa for a treatment on her birthday in april. I need about 150 at least, since my brother and I are splitting the cost. any ideas?