Your Questions About Quick Ways To Make Money For Teenagers

Sandy asks…

Can yo check my grammar?

Can yo check my grammar?

Beauty is in the eye of beholder is an unknown proverb in contemporary society. It is only a simple sentence that does not make any sense anymore. Some women think social interaction and personal success are dependent on physical attraction. Being perfect is a common issue, but when this issue becomes obsession it can become a more serious mental illness. Plastic surgery is a huge obsession among all people including preteens, teenagers, and adolescents. It is an obsession that is fed by models and celebrities who think nothing of going under the scalpel again and again in an elusive chase after a beauty icon that doesn’t exist.
Plastic surgery is not without risk. It is not healthy way to look perfect. Plastic surgery can affect person physical, socially and mentally. Plastic surgery can also have many side effects. It is painful procedure that can even lead to death. A young mother, Dehlmalyz Rios, was 26 years old when she decided to have plastic surgery. Two days after the surgery her body rejected the fat that was deposited in her calves. She died by leaving two children. It can ruin lives as well. Some side effects are permanent such as physical pain. Plastic surgery includes cutting, bending, stretching and other method to manipulate body structure in order to get desired shape. This causes pain, discomfort, and swelling that may remain for a lifetime. Plastic surgery can cause depression brought on by medication used to control the after affects of surgery. Of course there is always the post-surgical risk of pneumonia from having to remain in bed for long periods of time or of forced inactivity. Sometimes there are emotional traumas from the surgery not having the desired affect, or the person’s refusal to accept the modifications. There can also be guilt or bad feelings caused by spouses, relatives, or friends.
Cosmetic surgery is depends a great deal on the doctor’s qualifications. There are doctors who offer surgery at very low prices who are not skilled or qualified to perform plastic surgery. Most of these doctors are untrained except for a seminar in hotel for a few hours. Credentials aren’t checked so that people who may not even be doctors are allowed to take the seminar. In Miami, a doctor named Reinaldo Slivestre, practiced surgery in a small office. He had very little medical training. One of his patients, named Alexandra Baez, claimed that he gave him breast implants instead of the pectoral muscle implant that he had requested. Many doctors who are performing plastic surgery are not licensed by the American Board of Plastic Surgeons. They are quacks; get rich quick surgeons, performing as many surgeries as they can under less than sterile conditions.
Cosmetic surgery is not for everyone. This doesn’t prevent people from seeking it. Plastic surgery costs thousands of dollars and usually requires a lot of recovery time. Some people sacrifice their basic needs to save enough money for plastic surgery.
There are those who say that plastic surgery should not be used to just change someone’s appearance for the sake of vanity. Sometimes plastic surgery taken to the extreme can make someone look less than human, as is the case with Michael Jackson. People make fun of him, but he is wealthy enough that it doesn’t affect his life. But what about the person who was not wealthy or a celebrity and the surgery go wrong? The surgeon may say they are sorry, but they can just walk away. The patient has to live with the awful results. But whether the surgical effects are deemed a success or failure, both the surgeon and the patient are responsible for one requested

Nagesh answers:

I put dashes where words need to be ommitted. BTW that is a very common expression, never got to be a proverb, but was printed over and over in poetry and art for thousands of years. It is not out-dated, but except for that, I’ll just continue with the grammar. Where you need a new paragraph, I’ll skip a line. You will have to read this carefully, because I have no color or underline to show you where I’ve made corrections, and you tend to leave out words. I’ve put them in, so look for them, okay? (Preteens, teenagers and adolescents are the same, no?)

“Beauty is in the eye of beholder,” is an unknown proverb in contemporary society. It is —- a simple sentence that does not make — sense anymore. Some women, and now many more men, think social interaction and personal success are dependent on physical attraction, and unfortunately, in this society, they are often right. Being perfect is a common issue, but when this issue becomes an obsession it can grow into a far more serious mental illness.

Plastic surgery is a huge obsession among all people including preteens, teenagers, and adolescents. It is an obsession that is fed by models and celebrities who think nothing of going under the scalpel again and again in an elusive chase after a beauty icon that doesn’t exist.

Plastic surgery is not without risk. It is not a healthy way to look perfect. Plastic surgery can affect a person physically, socially and mentally, and it can — have many side effects. It is a painful procedure that can even lead to death. There is a 5% death risk for all people who undergo anesthesia, especially general anesthesia, which is used in many cosmetic operations.

A young mother, Dehlmalyz Rios, was 26 years old when she decided to have plastic surgery. Two days after the surgery her body rejected the fat that was deposited in her calves. She died, leaving two children behind. Clearly it can ruin the lives of more than just its proponents.

Plastic surgery includes cutting, bending, stretching and other methods to manipulate body structure in order to get a desired shape. This causes pain, discomfort, and swelling that may remain for a lifetime. Some side effects, such as physical pain, are permanent.

Plastic surgery can cause depression brought on by medication used to control the aftereffects of surgery. Poor and sometimes grotesque results may also bring on depression and other emotional problems.

Of course there is always the post-surgical risk of pneumonia from having to remain in bed for long periods of time or as a result of forced inactivity, and there are the risks of infection and human error. Sometimes there are emotional traumas from the surgery not having the desired effect, or the person’s inability to accept, or disappointment with, the modifications. There can also be guilt or bad feelings caused by spouses, relatives, or friends.

Cosmetic surgery — depends a great deal on the doctor’s qualifications. There are doctors who offer surgery at very low prices who are not skilled or qualified to perform plastic surgery. Most of these doctors are untrained except for a seminar in a hotel for a few hours. Credentials aren’t checked so that people who may not even be doctors are allowed to take these seminars.

In Miami, a doctor named Reinaldo Slivestre, practiced surgery in a small office. He had very little medical training. One of his patients, named Alexandra Baez, claimed that he gave him breast implants instead of the pectoral muscle implant that he had requested. Many doctors who are performing plastic surgery are not licensed by the American Board of Plastic Surgeons. They are quacks, get-rich-quick surgeons, who perform as many surgeries as they can and often under less than sterile conditions.

Cosmetic surgery is not for everyone. This doesn’t prevent people from seeking it. Plastic surgery costs thousands of dollars and usually requires a good deal of recovery time. Some people sacrifice their basic needs to save enough money to pay for the surgery.

There are those who say that plastic surgery should not be used to — change someone’s appearance for the sake of vanity. Sometimes plastic surgery taken to the extreme can make someone look less than human, as is the case with Michael Jackson. People make fun of him, but he is wealthy enough that it doesn’t seem to affect his life.

But what about the person who is not wealthy, or what if a celebrity and the surgeon go wrong in making decisions? The surgeon may say he or she is sorry, but the surgeon can just walk away. The patient has to live with the awful results. But whether the surgical effects are deemed a success or failure, both the surgeon and the patient are responsible. ————

That’s why cosmetic surgery is called “elective” surgery. It is non-essential to the health of the patient, yet it is thoughtlessly and often carelessly indulged in by a, hopefully, rational patient and doctor, this non-essential “beauty pill” that can be, and often is, a matter of life and death.

Donna asks…

can yo check my grammar?

Beauty is in the eye of beholder is an unknown proverb in contemporary society. It is only a simple sentence that does not make any sense anymore. Some women think social interaction and personal success are dependent on physical attraction. Being perfect is a common issue, but when this issue becomes obsession it can become a more serious mental illness. Plastic surgery is a huge obsession among all people including preteens, teenagers, and adolescents. It is an obsession that is fed by models and celebrities who think nothing of going under the scalpel again and again in an elusive chase after a beauty icon that doesn’t exist.
Plastic surgery is not without risk. It is not healthy way to look perfect. Plastic surgery can affect person physical, socially and mentally. Plastic surgery can also have many side effects. It is painful procedure that can even lead to death. A young mother, Dehlmalyz Rios, was 26 years old when she decided to have plastic surgery. Two days after the surgery her body rejected the fat that was deposited in her calves. She died by leaving two children. It can ruin lives as well. Some side effects are permanent such as physical pain. Plastic surgery includes cutting, bending, stretching and other method to manipulate body structure in order to get desired shape. This causes pain, discomfort, and swelling that may remain for a lifetime. Plastic surgery can cause depression brought on by medication used to control the after affects of surgery. Of course there is always the post-surgical risk of pneumonia from having to remain in bed for long periods of time or of forced inactivity. Sometimes there are emotional traumas from the surgery not having the desired affect, or the person’s refusal to accept the modifications. There can also be guilt or bad feelings caused by spouses, relatives, or friends.
Cosmetic surgery is depends a great deal on the doctor’s qualifications. There are doctors who offer surgery at very low prices who are not skilled or qualified to perform plastic surgery. Most of these doctors are untrained except for a seminar in hotel for a few hours. Credentials aren’t checked so that people who may not even be doctors are allowed to take the seminar. In Miami, a doctor named Reinaldo Slivestre, practiced surgery in a small office. He had very little medical training. One of his patients, named Alexandra Baez, claimed that he gave him breast implants instead of the pectoral muscle implant that he had requested. Many doctors who are performing plastic surgery are not licensed by the American Board of Plastic Surgeons. They are quacks; get rich quick surgeons, performing as many surgeries as they can under less than sterile conditions.
Cosmetic surgery is not for everyone. This doesn’t prevent people from seeking it. Plastic surgery costs thousands of dollars and usually requires a lot of recovery time. Some people sacrifice their basic needs to save enough money for plastic surgery.
There are those who say that plastic surgery should not be used to just change someone’s appearance for the sake of vanity. Sometimes plastic surgery taken to the extreme can make someone look less than human, as is the case with Michael Jackson. People make fun of him, but he is wealthy enough that it doesn’t affect his life. But what about the person who was not wealthy or a celebrity and the surgery go wrong? The surgeon may say they are sorry, but they can just walk away. The patient has to live with the awful results. But whether the surgical effects are deemed a success or failure, both the surgeon and the patient are responsible for one requested

Nagesh answers:

I’ll look it over quickly. I saw verb-tense arguments, and you need to use better qualifiers. Sometimes you are qualifying too much. If you can say it in one word, there’s no need for a list of descriptors. You should use more compound sentences. For example, combine these sentences “Plastic surgery is not without risk. It is not healthy way to look perfect.” This can be one sentence, and it would be more effective. There are many instances where a compound sentence would add fluidity to your paper.

“They are quacks” We know who they are, but what is a quack? You define a get rich surgeon, but what is a quack? It’s unnecessary and both “they” and the the term “quack” only adds weakness to your paper.

Avoid starting a sentence with a conjunction like “But.” Only really good writers get away with that, and until your style is supported with excellent grammar, you should avoid that error.

Well done, but it needs polishing. Sorry I don’t have time to look it over in more detail.

Jenny asks…

Being stingy about borrowing?

How so i approach this for the next time this happens?

I have a friend who likes to borrow my things… clothes, shoes, even luggage. We’re in our mid to late twenties and she still asks to borrow my things. Is there an age that “borrowing” becomes kind of… silly? Growing up in highschool, no prob, borrow whatever, the clothes we bought were cheap and inexpensive. But at this age, these things that are borrowed cost a pretty penny. She borrowed my carry on, and when i go it back, the second i opened it to use it, i felt like i got hit in the face with the smell of smoke. (Probably from putting dirty clothes she was wearing while she was smoking straight into the suitcase.) I am a non-smoker so i give her the benifit of the doubt she didn’t realize the smoke smell and I am probably sensitive to it. But examples like this. I put dirty clothes in a bag when Im coming home from vaca. I feel like i take very good care of my things, as that is how i keep things nice and longterm. I’ll even dryclean clothes that dont require a dry clean tag just because it was expensive and im afraid my washer/dryer would ruin them. Anyway. Im pregnant and i obviously am not wearing my clothes which has given her a reason to borrow my clothes longer. I really don’t feel comfortable lending my clothes/shoes to anyone really, but how to i stop something that has been normal since we were teenagers without feeling like im being snotty or rude? I don’t borrow her clothes. Plus, when we’ve been out shopping in the past, she would make comments “i wouldn’t pay $xx for that”… or “it’s cute, but not for $xx” for things i buy. Quick to insult, but quick to borrow at the same time. I know that I pay atleast double for anything that she is willing to pay for the nicer things, but knowing that i spend more, i take the extra mile to keep it nice. And a lot if it is irreplaceable I feel like i should add a disclaimer when she asks to borrow things, like, you can borrow whatever you want as long as you are willing to pay for it if something happens to it.lol… kind of an insurance thing? I dont think I would really ask for money if something were to happen, but would think this is a way to make her think twice about borrowing things. I just feel like we’re at an age that we shouldn’t be borrowing clothes anymore. So how do I hint at this? Any suggestions or am i being too much?

At the moment, she is borrowing a dress (for over a month now since im preggo). When she picked it up, it was in a dry cleaner bag. and asked if it has to be dry cleaned. I said no, but i like to have it cleaned that way. But obviously i had it dry cleaned, so wouldnt it be common courtesy to return something the way it was before? I see her in pictures at bars/nightclubs in the dress, and i think, i hope she doesn’t burn a hole in it with a cigarette.

Nagesh answers:

Just say No maybe with an excuse – its broken/damaged/lost/ then try and change the subject. I would be really annoyed if my stuff came back smelling of smoke or not cleaned.

Chris asks…

is this fine essay?

“Beauty is in the eye of beholder,” is an unknown proverb in contemporary society. It is a simple sentence that does not make sense anymore. Some women, and now many more men, think social interaction and personal success are dependent on physical attraction, and unfortunately, in this society, they are frequently right. Being perfect is a common issue, but when this issue becomes an obsession it can grow into a far more serious mental illness. Plastic surgery is a huge obsession among all people including preteens, teenagers, and adolescents. It is an obsession that is fed by models and celebrities who think nothing of going under the scalpel again and again in an elusive chase after a beauty icon that does not exist. Plastic surgery is not without risk. It is not a healthy way to look perfect.
Plastic surgery can affect a person physically, socially and mentally, and it can have many side effects. It is a painful procedure that can even lead to death. There is a five percent death risk for all people who undergo anesthesia, especially general anesthesia, which is used in many cosmetic surgeries (Younai). A young mother, Dehlmalyz Rios, was 26 years old when she decided to have plastic surgery. Two days after the surgery her body rejected the fat that was deposited in her calves. She died, leaving two children behind. Clearly it can ruin the lives of more than just its proponents (Peru 2). Plastic surgery includes cutting, bending, stretching and other methods to manipulate body structure in order to get a desired shape. This causes pain, discomfort, and swelling that may remain for a lifetime. Some side effects, such as physical pain, are permanent. Plastic surgery can cause depression brought on by medication used to control the aftereffects of surgery. Poor and sometimes grotesque results may also bring on depression and other emotional problems. Of course there is always the post-surgical risk of pneumonia from having to remain in bed for long periods of time or as a result of forced inactivity, and there are the risks of infection and human error. Sometimes there are emotional traumas from the surgery not having the desired effect, or the person’s inability to accept, or disappointment with, the modifications. There can also be guilt or bad feelings caused by spouses, relatives, colleague or friends.
Cosmetic surgery depends a great deal on the doctor’s qualifications. There are doctors who offer surgery at very low prices who are not skilled or qualified to perform plastic surgery. Most of these doctors are untrained except for a seminar in a hotel for a few hours. Credentials aren’t checked so that people who may not even be doctors are allowed to take these seminars. In Miami, a doctor named Reinaldo Silvestre, practiced surgery in a small office. He had very little medical training. One of his patients, named Alexandra Baez, claimed that he gave him breast implants instead of the pectoral muscle implant that he had requested (CNN). Many doctors who are performing plastic surgery are not licensed by the American Board of Plastic Surgeons. They are quacks, get-rich-quick surgeons, who perform as many surgeries as they can and often under less than sterile conditions (Odenthal).
Cosmetic surgery is not for everyone. This doesn’t prevent people from seeking it. Plastic surgery costs thousands of dollars and usually requires a good deal of recovery time. Some people sacrifice their basic needs to save enough money to pay for the surgery. There are those who say that plastic surgery should not be used to change someone’s appearance for the sake of vanity. Sometimes plastic surgery taken to the extreme can make someone look less than human, as is the case with Michael Jackson. People make fun of him, but he is wealthy enough that it doesn’t seem to affect his life.
But what about the person who is not wealthy or what if a celebrity and the surgeon go wrong in making decisions? The surgeon may say he or she is sorry, but the surgeon can just walk away. The patient has to live with the awful results. But whether the surgical effects are deemed a success or failure, both the surgeon and the patient are responsible the surgery and the other performed it. With everything there is good and bad. Plastic surgery is no exception.
Cosmetic surgery can make someone feel better about their looks, which may lead to an improved life. And certainly cosmetic surgery to repair birth defects, burns, and scars is a boon. But people need to realize that looking like a Hollywood star isn’t necessarily going to change your life or make you happier. They need to understand that things can and do go wrong with plastic surgery and the decision to have plastic surgery shouldn’t be taken lightly. Because when you get right down to it, beauty IS in the eye of the beholder.
Plastic surgery is a risk that is undertaken with both sorrow and pleasure. Before making a decision, a person must consider risks such as unexpected costs, untrained surgeons, and physical pain during and after surgery. People should not be taken in by how inexpensive a surgery is; rather, they should be concerned about the most important thing of all: life. Plastic surgery is preferable for people who don’t have other options, but it is not the best way to look like those Hollywood models and celebrities.

“Not guilty plea in fake plastic surgeon case.” November 19, 2004

http://www.cnn.com/2004/LAW/11/19/cosmetic.surgeries/

Karl Ross. “Search for Beauty Ends in Death.” 1998: 2
http://www.locateadoc.com/articles.cfm/1406/1412

http://www.cnn.com/2004/LAW/11/19/cosmetic.surgeries/

http://www.surgery.org/press/news-release.php?iid=363&section=news-safety

Nagesh answers:

How on earth did you get all these characters in your question???

I thought we were only allowed one thousand of them?!?

Mark asks…

Why can’t the current generation be good?

Ok. I have been watching countless videos on Youtube with people sharing their great experiences from the 90’s, you know, the great TV shows, the music, the fashion, and so as I was watching those videos, something occurred to me: THE CURRENT GENERATION SUCKS! I HATE it! All of it! Today’s television shows are lame, the music is HORRIBLE, the economy is a FAIL, natural disasters are on the rise, and the world in general is just crappy. I can’t even watch tv without hearing, Earthquake this, economy that, Justin Beiber this, and I just can’t take it. My generation just fails, and the people my age don’t even realize it. When I’m on the school bus, everyone is just texting and they’re plugged into their darn Ipods and cellphones. I can’t even talk to anybody because all they care about is their gadgets. No one even talks to anyone anymore. Why can’t I enjoy a simpler life? Back in the 90’s, most teenagers didn’t have cellphones, it took 3 minutes to get to the Internet, and you could still get analog tv. Now, everyone has a cellphone, and analog tv is gone forever. Now, television writers are lame, money grubbing idiots who just throw together poorly-written, nonsense shows, just so they can get a quick laugh and make a quick buck. They don’t care if the show is lame. All the 90’s shows I have seen are good, but most of the shows made nowadays are just failures. If they could make good shows back then, why can’t they make good shows now? Music now is lame, too. All the artists do is make stupid lyrics and use Autotune, thinking that they can sing good. And all the kids at school come in singing the dumb songs and probably don’t even know what they’re saying. And if you don’t listen to the same music that everyone listens to, they gang up on you and ridicule you. It’s really stupid. I just HATE my generation. WHY did I have to grow up in this crappy period? I’m sure I would have liked the 90’s better, but, sadly I was only two when the 90’s ended. I didn’t get to experience it at all. When I see videos of 20-something year-old people reminiscing about the 90’s, I feel glad for them that they had a good generation, but I die inside because I know that mine sucks. Why do things have to be like this? Why does the current generation have so many problems? I feel betrayed. I feel like I don’t deserve to have grown up in such a bad time. I just wish that things were better, life was simpler, just like the 90’s were said to be. I just want to know why are things this way now, and is there anything that can be done about it?

Nagesh answers:

I’m 24 and i grew up during the 90’s, it wasn’t that long ago but there have been numerous technological advancements since then and it just feels like we’re living on another planet. My honest opinion is that our dependency on the internet is the downfall of everything. Yes, it’s an incredibly useful tool that makes life that much easier(and most of us would be lost without it), but i feel that this electronic colonization is acting as a crutch for society.

For instance, if you wear glasses, your eyes naturally become weaker over time because they’re not being used nearly as much. The same could be said about the cognitive abilities of today’s youth. When i was a kid, not many people had cell phones and even fewer people had computers. The internet was a vast wasteland and there really wasn’t much compared to these days, most people really didn’t care much about it. As a result, the world seemed to move a little bit slower. These days, everything is available at the push of a button. The end result is just a massive sense of impatience, and it’s definitely causing a noticeable change in how kids act these days.

As for having better music, movies, tv, etc, corporations are what happened. When people start selling out, quality becomes second tier next to a paycheck. Kurt Cobain never valued the almighty dollar over his lyrics, and this eventually caused him to end his own life. You just don’t see that kind of behavior these days…at least you seem normal, maybe there’s hope. Good luck yo.

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